Strange Clouds

Appearing as a
giant flame, these clouds,
sprinkled with stars, stretch accross
the sky, chasing the setting
sun beyond the horizon.

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  1. This is my second tanka. I am still completing the syllable count by starting some of the lines on earlier lines. But things are flowing better now, there is a sense of that flow as you read it. That flow works both ways, it flowed just as easily for me to write it,

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