Cool Damp Afternoon

Dark clouds gather.
Rain gently falls.
Frog joyously sings!

Alternative Version

Dark clouds gathering.
Rain gently falling.
Frog joyously singing!

Which do you prefer? Comment below.

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2 thoughts on “Cool Damp Afternoon

  1. I found myself liking the latter version, its vibration. My mind became curious why was that and probed into the feeling. So the latter one was in motion, alive, whalmost pulpable, while the first one felt generalized, dry, unattached to the current reality. What do you feel yourself?

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